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Friday, October 5, 2012

Lie Tender 55


they're buried beneath
delicate flowers, in different
stages of growth

Those soft petals
you've stroked,
pretending to love.

However, the brusies
are irrefutable evidence
of your personal touch-

Like your lies.

When you're exposed,
you blame the seeds
the soil
the garden
and the flowers -
but in reality,

YOU were the reason the garden grew

Note: This is a shortened version of a poem I have on my Poetic Blog. Sometimes people get so caught up in what they're doing, they don't see how it affects someone else, the effect being emotional and mental damage.


G-Man said...

Oh what tangled webs we weave....
Misilla, I loved your 55
Thanks for playing, I always love your poetic musings, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Melissa Bickel said...

Oh Galen, this one went beyond spinning....he was taking advantage of a dying woman...grrrrr
alas he's been found out LOL. That is Justice.

Have a great weekend yourself. Love the car.

Other Mary said...

Oh, this one took a dark turn. So sorry to hear it's based on something real, but very artfully penned.

Alice Audrey said...

I think that happens a lot more than anyone wants to admit.

Heaven said...

Very well done ~ That last line was the power punch ~

Happy weekend ~

magiceye said...

Wow! So beautifully conceptualised and versed! Lovely!

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

Yes, and some hurtful lies are more intentional than others. There are people who, for reasons of their own, simply cannot be honest.

Brian Miller said...

you will reap what you sow for sure....

Linc said...

Oh, this cuts deep. And what Brian says is too true... I'd say "Bravo" but I'm still rubbing the sore spots. Nevertheless, it is very beautiful. Here's mine: New Deal

Lydia said...

This one is special. Very deep, but with a lilting flow to it.